Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Washing Machine Hans - What's good and what's bad?

What I like the most about in Mr. Hans Washing Machine's presentation is that his story at the start of the presentation, he started off with a memory about his grandmother's first time seeing a washing machine, which is very fascinating because I've never seen anyone that excited or happy about a machine that washes your clothes before! However, I don't like the fact that he changes his subject at the end of the presentation, which makes me a little confused, first, the topic started off as a washing machine story and he ended the presentation about reading books? I don't get it!

The Start:
He started out with a story, which is funny and entertaining. When he told the story, it was very well rehearsed since he didn't fidget or acted nervous.

Signposting:
He used a lot of signposting words to help the audience connect the topics together, which also made the presentation flowed smoothly without any information missing.

Structure:
He started off with a great hook, he focused on the main part of his presentation very well, his ending was confusing but it was very good as well.

Delivery:
He delivered his message very well! His voice was clear, loud and his accent made the presentation funnier!

Visual Aids:
He used a lot of visual aids, which included the chart, the props (washing machine, clothes, books, etc.), his hand and body movements. The visual aids he used help him delivering his message and made it easier for the audience to understand the purpose of his message.

The End:
He ended with the books, which I didn't quite understand, but it was humorous nonetheless.

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