First of all, i think it is really creative and fascinating especially the squirrel's sound. It was easier for me to understand because the pronunciation was really clear and slow. I think you guys had not much of sound effects during the conversation between the seller and squirrel. I really liked the music in your commercial but at last record, i heard someone was speaking really fast the number... i don't know. The audience should be kids or it might be teenager,too. Great!! I really loved this commercial!
I very love this commercial about an apple toothbrush. The whole ideas bow me off very quickly. You guys have mention what you are trying right in the introduction and I think it's amazing. Other than that, I love the effects. It help me a lot on getting to know the plot. The punctuations and pronunciation of each words is terrific. I can be able to understand what is going on right at the first time I played it. I like your chosen in music but there is something else I think you guys could improve on like the transition, I think it should be more smooth when you change the background music. The conclusion was a little bit of because I don't feel very interesting by it since the seller's talking. Other than that, I think the commercial is catchy and very well done at the age of you guys. I think you have complete this task successfully. And great ideas with the high pitch voice, it attracts me more ;)
First of all, i think it is really creative and fascinating especially the squirrel's sound. It was easier for me to understand because the pronunciation was really clear and slow. I think you guys had not much of sound effects during the conversation between the seller and squirrel. I really liked the music in your commercial but at last record, i heard someone was speaking really fast the number... i don't know. The audience should be kids or it might be teenager,too. Great!! I really loved this commercial!
ReplyDeleteI very love this commercial about an apple toothbrush. The whole ideas bow me off very quickly. You guys have mention what you are trying right in the introduction and I think it's amazing. Other than that, I love the effects. It help me a lot on getting to know the plot. The punctuations and pronunciation of each words is terrific. I can be able to understand what is going on right at the first time I played it. I like your chosen in music but there is something else I think you guys could improve on like the transition, I think it should be more smooth when you change the background music. The conclusion was a little bit of because I don't feel very interesting by it since the seller's talking. Other than that, I think the commercial is catchy and very well done at the age of you guys. I think you have complete this task successfully. And great ideas with the high pitch voice, it attracts me more ;)
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